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Tuesday, October 7, 2008

They Say` :: Bacons Rebellion.

This is going to be straightforward.

In the discussions of Bacon's Rebellion, one controversial issue has been whether Nathanial Bacon was a hero in his community or not. On the one hand, the article, A Young People's History of the United States, written by Howard Zinn portrays him as a "protector" of the white people of the lower class. Pg 39 states that "Bacon accused the Berkeley government of wrong doing, including unfair taxes and not protecting the western farmers from the Indians." I honestly believe that that was a lame excuse used to justify his irrational behavior towards people he did not like. Michael Puglisi, on the other hand, showed a different side of Bacon through his article "Whether They Be Friends Or Foes", saying things like "The soldiers even killed an elderly native woman, "the Queens nurse"...pg.78" Using the word even to emphasize how brutal Bacon's army was. Bacon's Rebellion was a group of oppressed people who were tired of the unfairness in their community, who used violence as an escape from their misery.

4 comments:

Tre Kelly said...

.You did a nice job mikaela, and I believe your work was straight to the point
.Way to put down the page numbers that your quotes were on
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Tre Kelly said...

.There was no "I Say,"It was all "They Say."(which is good)
.Followed the templates
. paragraph length and quality were good

Anonymous said...

-I thought i was staright forward (like you said and the beginning) and wasn't boring.
-There were good quotes that actually had a point.
-I think it was overall really well written and informative.
- my only suggestion is to make it a little less bias. Otherwise i think its good.

Mikaela said...

Self Revision::

-i think it could be longer, but i suck at writing so i don't know how to make it longer without kind of losing the straightforward, type of writing i like to do.
-Not be so Bias, like Kate C. said
-i think its to the point, i could have used different quotes that could also fit in their places.
overall i believe it tells the "conversation" like Craig asked for.